Deliverable 5 – Revising and Editing Professional Emails

Assessments Content

1. COMPETENCY

   Apply Concepts of Professional Writing to Prewriting, Drafting, Revising, and Editing.

   INSTRUCTIONS

   Below are two professional emails. Read through each of the emails copy and paste them to a Word Document. Edit them utilizing the Review tab in Microsoft Word. Please review each email, finding all errors in grammar, vocabulary, spelling, punctuation and professionalism.After you have completed editing and revising the email, pick one of the two and re-write the email so that it is free of all spelling, grammar and content errors and is professional and informative

3. Email #1
4. From: Tricia Marcus
5. To: Allison Brown
6. Subject: Today’s Meeting
7. Hey Allison!I am looking forward to seeing you today for our meeting. I’ve attached the materials needed for our discussion. Let me know if you have any questions.Regards,Tricia MarcusMarketer Extraordinairehotpartychick@triciamarketing.com(555) 545-5656“Be so good they can’t ignore you.” – Steve Martin
9. Email #2
10. To: Bob Pope
11. From: Gabrielle Mendes
12. Subject: Job?
13. Hey Bob, We talked a couple weeks back at the chamber of commerce event. (I was the one looking for a summer internship and had a zit on my lip that could have passed for a cold soar. Lol. Whew. It was not. You’re probably like, “uh.. What?” Maybe that helps you recall, maybe not. Not completely important, I suppose.I’d really like to come work for you at your IT business. You seemed like a cool person to work for, I liked ur striped pants. I’m available to start working on Monday, but I am taking my driver’s test in June and have to study and go an hour and half away to take it at an easier place cause I’m not a great driver so I’ll miss a few days. I am also going to the beach with friends for a week in July. Oh, and my grandmother has bad gas (OMG IT’S TERRIBLE) and sometimes I have to take her to the doctor.I’ve attached my resume, it’s the bomb dot com. Let me know if you have a job opening for me. I can’t wait to play on some computers. If I don’t respond to your email, I’m always on FB, snapchat or insta!
14. Peace out,
15. Gabrielle Mendes

Grading

Maximum points

100 points